D112 References

From: Francis Dupont
Subject: Re: [Mobike] WGLC on the design draft
Date: Wed, 21 Dec 2005 17:51:34 +0100

| 10.2.  Informative References
| 
|    [I-D.dupont-mipv6-3bombing]
|               Dupont, F., "A note about 3rd party bombing in Mobile
|               IPv6", draft-dupont-mipv6-3bombing-02 (work in progress),
|               June 2005.

I submitted a 03 version this morning.

|    [I-D.ietf-mip6-ro-sec]
|               Nikander, P., "Mobile IP version 6 Route Optimization
|               Security Design Background", draft-ietf-mip6-ro-sec-03
|               (work in progress), May 2005.

This was published as the RFC 4225 (with many authors).

|    [I-D.ietf-ipv6-optimistic-dad]
|               Moore, N., "Optimistic Duplicate Address Detection for
|               IPv6", draft-ietf-ipv6-optimistic-dad-06 (work in
|               progress), September 2005.

Not referenced (it seems the last xml2rfc detects this)

| [I-D.ietf-ipv6-unique-local-addr]
|               Hinden, R. and B. Haberman, "Unique Local IPv6 Unicast
|               Addresses", draft-ietf-ipv6-unique-local-addr-09 (work in
|               progress), January 2005.

Same issue.

From: Jari Arkko
Subject: [Mobike] References (Was: Re:  WGLC on the design draft)
Date: Wed, 21 Dec 2005 19:06:10 +0200

| |10.2.  Informative References
| |
| |   [I-D.dupont-mipv6-3bombing]
| |              Dupont, F., "A note about 3rd party bombing in Mobile
| |              IPv6", draft-dupont-mipv6-3bombing-02 (work in progress),
| |              June 2005.
| |
| I submitted a 03 version this morning.
|  
|
Ack.

| |   [I-D.ietf-mip6-ro-sec]
| |              Nikander, P., "Mobile IP version 6 Route Optimization
| |              Security Design Background", draft-ietf-mip6-ro-sec-03
| |              (work in progress), May 2005.
| |
| this was published as the RFC 4225 (with many authors)
|  
|
Yes.

| |   [I-D.ietf-ipv6-optimistic-dad]
| |              Moore, N., "Optimistic Duplicate Address Detection for
| |              IPv6", draft-ietf-ipv6-optimistic-dad-06 (work in
| |              progress), September 2005.
| |
| not referenced (it seems the last xml2rfc detects this)
|
| |   [I-D.ietf-ipv6-unique-local-addr]
| |              Hinden, R. and B. Haberman, "Unique Local IPv6 Unicast
| |              Addresses", draft-ietf-ipv6-unique-local-addr-09 (work in
| |              progress), January 2005.
|
| same issue.
|  
|
Both of these ARE referenced. The other reference has
a linebreak I think, which may have caused you to not
notice. The references are from the definitions in Sect. 2.

From: Francis Dupont
Subject: Re: [Mobike] References (Was: Re: WGLC on the design draft)
Date: Wed, 21 Dec 2005 18:43:37 +0100

|   Both of these ARE referenced.

you're right (I did the grep in the wrong file).

From: Jari Arkko
Subject: [Mobike] design draft issue: references
Date: Wed, 21 Dec 2005 12:53:58 +0200


| 10.1.  Normative references
|
|    [I-D.ietf-ipsec-ikev2]
|               Kaufman, C., "Internet Key Exchange (IKEv2) Protocol",
|               draft-ietf-ipsec-ikev2-17 (work in progress),
|               October 2004.
|
|    [I-D.ietf-ipsec-rfc2401bis]
|               Kent, S. and K. Seo, "Security Architecture for the
|               Internet Protocol", draft-ietf-ipsec-rfc2401bis-06 (work
|               in progress), April 2005.

It might be that the MOBIKE protocol spec is a useful
reference to the reader as well...

|    [I-D.arkko-multi6dt-failure-detection]
|               Arkko, J., "Failure Detection and Locator Selection in
|               Multi6", draft-arkko-multi6dt-failure-detection-00 (work
|               in progress), October 2004.

Refer to draft-ietf-shim6-failure-detection-03 instead (to
appear today).

|    [I-D.ietf-mip6-ro-sec]
|               Nikander, P., "Mobile IP version 6 Route Optimization
|               Security Design Background", draft-ietf-mip6-ro-sec-03
|               (work in progress), May 2005.

This is now RFC 4225.

From: Tero Kivinen
Subject: [Mobike]  D112 design draft issue: references
Date: Tue, 3 Jan 2006 19:57:20 +0200

Jari Arkko writes:
| 
| | 10.1.  Normative references
| |
| |    [I-D.ietf-ipsec-ikev2]
| |               Kaufman, C., "Internet Key Exchange (IKEv2) Protocol",
| |               draft-ietf-ipsec-ikev2-17 (work in progress),
| |               October 2004.
| |
| |    [I-D.ietf-ipsec-rfc2401bis]
| |               Kent, S. and K. Seo, "Security Architecture for the
| |               Internet Protocol", draft-ietf-ipsec-rfc2401bis-06 (work
| |               in progress), April 2005.
| 
| It might be that the MOBIKE protocol spec is a useful
| reference to the reader as well...

I do not think you must read the protocol draft to understand this
document, thats why it is informative reference. On the other hand you
do need to know something about IKEv2 or RFC4301 architecture before
reading this.

| |    [I-D.arkko-multi6dt-failure-detection]
| |               Arkko, J., "Failure Detection and Locator Selection in
| |               Multi6", draft-arkko-multi6dt-failure-detection-00 (work
| |               in progress), October 2004.
| 
| Refer to draft-ietf-shim6-failure-detection-03 instead (to
| appear today).

Updated. 

| |    [I-D.ietf-mip6-ro-sec]
| |               Nikander, P., "Mobile IP version 6 Route Optimization
| |               Security Design Background", draft-ietf-mip6-ro-sec-03
| |               (work in progress), May 2005.
| 
| This is now RFC 4225.

Updated.

Changed also IKEv2 to RFC4306 and RFC2401bis to RFC4301.